lemonjoe

Hey everyone, I just did my first practice essays for the GRE written section. I did one prompt for an argument essay and one prompt for an issue essay with a strict 30-minute time limit for each. I would love some feedback on each if anyone would like to help me out. Any and all comments, suggestions and even potential scores would be appreciated. Thanks! Issue: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bx_ZSOhzsCC8MUhfd1ZzTlU4X2M Argument: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bx_ZSOhzsCC8cHBvNWtkb2FuczQ