Good points. I suppose for me, being accepted into MA programs wasn't much of a battle or badge of honor, as I have always considered it simply the first step towards my PhD and because I got into every program I applied to (only 3, but still). You've definitely put a great perspective on it for me, though, because I can say with confidence that my personal statement and conversations with POI and grad director all stayed within the lines of your second example.
Even still, trying not to get my hopes up just in case! I only applied to the 1 school this year since my MA thesis is still a work in progress, and if I don't get in I will reapply next year and to a few schools in Boston.