There are essentially three drafts of my writing sample.
The first draft was sent to 5 schools. It had this needless section that I axe'd.
The second draft was sent to one school. It axe'd the needless section, but still contained an error where my argument was subtly wrong because I'd included the word "justify" rather than "explain" in three places.
The third draft is as far as I can tell strong, but I'm nervous about it because I never got it looked at by a professor for feedback, and it was a paper I'd written independent of any class.
Maybe I should upload it here.