SOP Review Request (History)

[historygeek]

Reposting w/o identifying information.

Would anyone mind reviewing my SOP for Rutgers' history PhD program? It's a bit longer than the 500 word limit, so any ideas on how to cut down words is much appreciated. Just a warning: it's a bit rough! You can find it here. 

TIA! 

Edit: I am now under the 500 word limit (491 words, woo hoo!). 

Edited June 24, 2018 by historygeek

[Sigaba]

14 hours ago, historygeek said:

Reposting w/o identifying information.

Would anyone mind reviewing my SOP for Rutgers' history PhD program? It's a bit longer than the 500 word limit, so any ideas on how to cut down words is much appreciated. Just a warning: it's a bit rough! You can find it here. 

TIA! 

Edit: I am now under the 500 word limit (491 words, woo hoo!). 

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[historygeek]

Hi everyone! I wrote my SOP for Harvard today. It’s super rough, so I would love it if you ripped it to shreds. It’s here. TIA!!