Please correct my analytical skills.

[Vivek01995]

 

 Statement:

To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

 My essay:

One must have diversifying knowledge to understanding the characteristics of the society.

Apparently, major cities contain people from different places which could be an advantage in studying the characteristics of major cities.

 

Recently a person named Ron, my friend who got the job in the Delhi which is a major city in the India, moved to that place.He has not studied anything about the city behaviour and ended up coming back within two months.

However, the characteristics of the major cities need not be the same as the minor cities. I strongly believe that one must understand the major cities characteristics to understand the society