Would anyone be willing to read my SOP?

[Shahzad]

Hi Everyone,

Being a non-native speaker, i need someone to just go over my SOP. I tried to slide humor in my opening paragraph. So i need some review whether it works or not ? Moreover, any comments on the grammar or the content will be highly appreciated. I am trying to apply for a graduate program in engineering sciences.

[GeorgiaTechPhd]

Hey, I would be happy to read your SOP and give any feedback, if it's not too late already.