Could someone look at my biochem grad school SOP?

[calizab]

So I’ve written a rough draft of my SOP, and don’t know who to ask to look at it/ am kind of embarrassed to share it because it’s not too good.

so what better way to get opinions than ask strangers on the internet!

 

For real, please let me know if you’d be willing to take a look at it and thank you so so much ahead of time. I really just want some opinions to gauge if I’m even going in the right direction with this.

 

Thank you!!!

[Tvesha]

feel free to pm me! i can look at it :)

[shahofblah]

I can take a look at it. Would you be willing to review my SOP as well? I'm applying for immunology PhD programs.