SOP Review for Human-Computer Interaction MS programs - help, please!

[else]

Hi everyone!

I am getting ready to apply to MS programs in HCI and I am wondering if there is anyone who is willing to look at my SOP. I have been editing and reading over it for three weeks now and would love if someone can provide me with another set of eyes and outside perspective. Thanks so much!

[allusernamesweretakensooo]

Hey I'll review yours. Would you mind reviewing mine too?