review my SOP

[shaileshdc]

Hi,

I am going to apply for fall 2011 for MS in electrical engg.

Can somebody review my sop?

Thanks

Shailesh

[newms]

I'll be happy to give you my thoughts on your SOP. Just send me a PM if you're interested.

[shaileshdc]

sent it to you..

[shaileshdc]

any comments?

[newms]

I've sent you my comments by PM

[shaileshdc]

thanks a lot!

[oiseauaudio]

i'd be happy to look at your SOP too, if you are still looking for feedback!

[shaileshdc]

i hv sent it to u..reply via PM.

Thanks

Shailesh

[newms]

thanks a lot!

You're welcome. I'm happy to help.

[shaileshdc]

@oiseauaudio: any comments?

[DrFaustus666]

shaileshdc:

Though I'm not an engineer (I do have 30 undergrad credits in CS), I've been a technical writer for many years, and would be happy to look also, if you still need or want another set of eyes to go over your SOP.

The offer is NOT completely altruistic. I'm in the process of writing my own, and I'd like to see the kinds of things other people write too.