Any kind souls out there to read my history SOP?

[historyhopeful]

I'm applying to study early modern Jewish-Christian interaction, and finally took a stab at a first draft. Any volunteers out there to read it and tell me if I've got something to work with or am completely off?

[Bukharan]

I'm applying to study early modern Jewish-Christian interaction, and finally took a stab at a first draft. Any volunteers out there to read it and tell me if I've got something to work with or am completely off?

I could help. Send it to me as a private message.

[historyhopeful]

Thanks, Bukharan! I've sent it. Maladyetz (I am guessing that you've got some Russian based on your handle..)

I could help. Send it to me as a private message.

[Nytusse]

I know a little something about your area, so I'll be glad to take a look.

[TMP]

And me...