SOP critique

[Go_Girl]

I have written an SOP which is actually a general template which I will use as backbone to design the Univ specific SOPs. Would anyone like to evaluate?

Edited November 10, 2010 by Go_Girl

[babyology]

I have written an SOP which is actually a general template which I will use as backbone to design the Univ specific SOPs. Would anyone like to evaluate?

What kinds of programs are you applying for?

[Go_Girl]

I am applying for MS in CS Would you like to evaluate?

I am willing to reciprocate the same in case anyone needs a critique. So I would really appreciate some help

Edited November 10, 2010 by Go_Girl

[Go_Girl]

No one is interested :( I would appreciate any little help! Because I really have to send my applications over the weekend or so.

Before that I would like to get the 2nd draft re-evaluated.

I would really like some help even if the person is not of my branch and interests.

Edited November 10, 2010 by Go_Girl

[zenna]

No one is interested :( I would appreciate any little help! Because I really have to send my applications over the weekend or so.

Before that I would like to get the 2nd draft re-evaluated.

I would really like some help even if the person is not of my branch and interests.

Sure, PM it over

[jinka]

send it over !

[SamiurRahman]

I'd love to critique it. Trade for mine? If so, PM it over.

[Go_Girl]

Thank u all so much.. I will send my SOP.. i was a little busy with tests over the weekend

thanks again

[Go_Girl]

No comments yet?

[Go_Girl]

Would anyone be interested in reading my SOP draft?

Its in Q & A Format. SO its easier to read and spot errors.

I have PMed to many who volunteered but I guess they are too busy at the moment because i have not received any comments yet. If anyone else is interested I will be very grateful

[Go_Girl]

The weekend is almost here

But No one other than zenna has given me a critique. Esp after I refined the initial glitches. If any kind people are interested then I am willing to reciprocate the same.

Thank you

[JessR417]

Hi Go-Girl,

I am also looking for critiques. Would you like to swap statements? I see you have been having trouble with people not getting back to you, I can respond by Friday if you get it to me either today or tomorrow!

[go_girl2]

Hello everyone. After keeping my SOP in cold storage for days now, I've reformatted and edited the bad parts. Now it has a brand new look on it! Is anyone willing to have a look?

I would be very happy if someone can because I have semester exams coming in 2 days and I really badly need some help.

[Go_Girl]

oops dat was my other profile because I was having problems with my original profile.. In case anyone is willing to help please lemme knw!

[Bkid-Sapps]

I'd be happy to take a look and offer some thoughts.