Evalute my SOP plz (ECE)

[dejected.soul]

I got rejection from seven schools for Fall 2011, now I will be reapplying for M.S (Spring 2012 session).

Can some one help me in evaluating my SOP? I want to get second opinion and want to correct mistakes in my SOP.

[speed]

I got rejection from seven schools for Fall 2011, now I will be reapplying for M.S (Spring 2012 session).

Can some one help me in evaluating my SOP? I want to get second opinion and want to correct mistakes in my SOP.

PM me your SOP

[newms]

I'll look at it for you. You can PM me.

[kwadwo]

I also need advice on writing my SOP for fall 2012. I have to write

everything in 300words and i'm not sure whether to concentrate more

telling them about myself as a person or my research interests.

Can anyone help. I will be applying for Calgary ECE.