SOP Review / Exchange - 2nd Draft

[kiddo]

I have just finished the 2nd draft of my SOP and I'd love some feedback! I'd also be happy to exchange statements with others. If interested, PM me with your email address and I will forward you my draft.

A little bit about my SOP for those interested:

• It's thematic (my first draft was chronological but it seemed dull)
  
• I've been working on it with my university writing center over the summer so hopefully reading it won't make your eyes bleed
  
• I'm having trouble with the introduction
  

Thanks!

Edited August 23, 2011 by kiddo