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UC Essay 2


misterpat

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For those of you who applied to UC campuses:

Did anyone else hate the second section of the SOP? It was like a mandatory diversity statement. I didn't notice it until the final day (the department only lists that they require an SOP) and threw together an extremely mediocre and brief essay.

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You mean the essay topic that made me want to barf? Yeah, I know what you mean. What evil person thinks up these things?

Oh, and there was a similar (but not quite the same) essay on the fellowship application for Davis. Bleah. Having to do one was bad enough...

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Yeah it seemed to be just splitting a typical statement of purpose in half, so I just took out diversity, awards, and accomplishments and put them into a separate small two paragraph essay. With the actual statement, I kept interests, previous research, who I want to work with in the department, etc. But that was only for UCSB, UCSD only required a regular SOP. Honestly a couple of the applications I did were very tedious with three or four documents that had to be created separately that could have been placed online or made into a single document. Being that I live in Colombia and had to organize all kinds of material from over here, I really appreciated the schools which have put the great majority of their applications online.

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Yeah, I applied to UCSB; figured it was the same for all campuses (I noticed some Berkeley Econ applicants griping about it or something very similar).

Michigan had something similar. A "Personal Statement" in addition to the Statement of Purpose, but it was less explicitly about being from an underprivileged school/area/ethnic group.

My statement of purpose didn't have a lot of personal background in it for most of my schools; I was kind of all business about academics and my interests. I had more in early drafts but cut it out since it all sounded so cliche to me. So, the second essay was extra painful for me to write.

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