Willing to comment on a SOP?

[violet.]

Hi fellow applicants! I would appreciate it if someone (or more) would be willing to look over my statement of purpose and comment. I am applying this cycle for a PhD program in SOC. It is very obvious by my interests where I want to study, so I don't feel comfortable sharing much publicly.

Anyway, let me know if you can help and I will PM it to you.

Thanks so much!

[sociology27]

I'd be willing to look it over and give a few comments if you'd like.

[violet.]

Thanks so much! I will PM it to you now. I really appreciate your help.

[litjust]

I'm willing to offer commentary also.

[violet.]

Thanks litjust, I am PM'ing it now!

[litjust]

^Did you get my response?