SoP Proofread Request - ND MA ECS

[toby42]

I have just 'finished' my SoP for the MA in Early Christian Studies for Notre Dame. I'm sure it could undergo a few more tweaks and thought I'd ask if someone who'd been there (not ND, necessarily, but an accepted grad) might offer to proofread it for me and offer me any advice they might have.

 

Thank you.

[renwod90]

Although I'm not a grad student, if there are no takers, I'd be happy to look over it. My undergrad minor was Religious Studies. My bf and I could look over it together, for he received an Eng PhD a few years ago.