Will someone please proofread my SOP??

[jar2267]

Look, 

I am desperately trying to get into Electrical Engineering programs. According to my family, my SOP is horrible. I've written it, re-written it, even paid to have someone edit it...but each time it's apparently "horrible." I think it's alright. I would really appreciate it if I could send the statement to someone to proofread. 

 

Thank you for your time.

[TakeMyCoffeeBlack]

PM me.

[tspier2]

I'd be glad to take a look at it too. I'm currently a Secondary English Education major. Don't despair!

[Flandre Scarlet]

PM me.