Can anyone please look at my SoP? It's for a Digital Media course.

[Sarah Bee]

The programme I am applying to is Digital Media. I am done with the letter but not sure about the structure. It starts with an anecdote which I think is slighltly negative. It's a bit urgent and I need it reviewed asap.

I'd be grateful if someone volunteers to help. Can't upload here as the programme coordinator told me they check the letters for plagiarism. 

I will inbox.

 

Thanks in advance! 

Edited September 15, 2014 by Sarah Bee

[StudyStar]

Sent you a PM!