IN GREAT NEED OF CRITIQUES for Personal Statement & SoP(Soc major)

[mgill007]

Hello!

 

It would be greatly appreciated if some people would give me critiques and advice on both personal statement and SoP! I am the first person in my family to continue to graduate school. I need both writings to be flawless, so please don't hold back. Thank you so much in advance! Hope you all have a great Thanksgiving!

 

 

The link is:

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YwxA5QR5VBL_RZMBTEUwadVx2rH6cFO8gaw9APv1eg8/edit?usp=sharing

 

 

[isilya]

Right now the google doc is set to "view only". If you set it so that anyone with the link can edit and repost the link, people can make comments & suggestions directly on the document

[mgill007]

Okay, thank you for letting me know! I changed it where people can now edit it. 

[purplegrey]

Hey,

I'm applying to a masters of social work, would you be interested in editing my personal statement?

Okay, thank you for letting me know! I changed it where people can now edit it. 

[mgill007]

I'm willing to look at it.