Need help with editing my SOP

[TheGreenSneakers]

Hi All,

I am applying for PhD program at Ecology and Evolutionary Biology Department in Columbia University, NY. I am hitting a rock bottom with my SOP and would really like to get some honest opinions. If any of you are up for it, please let me know. To give you a brief overview about myself:

1. Undergraduate in Life Science: 74%

2. Worked as an intern for two major conservation-oriented organizations: ATREE and SACON

3. Masters in Ecology with majors in Conservation Biology and worked on Human-Elephant conflicts (something similar is supposed to be my PhD study too) GPA: 8.5

4. Fellowship and scholarship by Young India Fellowship for one year.

5. Fellowship of Mother Teresa Social Enterprise

6. Working as a Project Officer presently 

Thanks a bunch in advance

Green Sneakers

[adiJ]

I'm also applying to CU, however to a different biology department. Would you need me to review your SOP?