Review and thoughts for my SoP please

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Hello all,  

I am in the same situation as many people, I think.  I am applying to a grad program (International Transportation Management) which is far different from my undergrad course of study (Geology) and would like any input, good or bad, about my statement of purpose.  I only address my undergrad in passing as it has very little bearing on this field.  It is succinct, roughly 600 words but I think it covers all the bases.  English is my first language and it has been revised several times.  If anyone would mind taking a few minutes to review and comment, your help would be a great help and much appreciated. Please email or message me with any comments. Thanks! 

statement_of_purpose.docx

[Axil]

I am unable to access the link, and I suspect others are unable as well.