GRE AWA Essays

[CourtneyHunt]

Hi, 

I have recently begun studying for the GRE, which I am taking at the end of August, and I have just completed a couple of practice essays. I have attached these essays, and am wondering if anyone with experience would kindly be able to look over these essays in regards to the GRE scoring scheme and give me feedback on areas in which I can improve. 

Thank you very much, I deeply appreciate your help!

Courtney 

Essays_1.docx

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