I replied to the HM email (and also CCed infofell@nas.edu) yesterday with my name and last 4 digits of SSN and just got a link to my comments back today.
For those who won/scored in the excellent range how did you address the following - especially personal engagement with under-represented groups. I talked a lot about my outreach activities...but that seems not to be what they were looking for?
Evidence of a capacity to respond to needs of students from diverse backgrounds
Evidence of a sustained personal engagement with groups underrepresented in academe
Evidence of likelihood of using diversity as a resource in teaching and scholarship