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Vancouver: thin envelope arrived this afternoon.  Time for an overhaul.  (Thinking of all the learning since I applied last Fall - I'm going to put it to work!)
A warm (well, rainy) thanks to all those who shared updates on this thread... it helps to better understand how this process works. I appreciate that it often takes more than one try. 
And, a hearty Congratulations to those with a thick envelope!  Well Done!!
For the other 1,183 of us: no shame.  It was a bubble of time imagining the possibilities... and I wish you all the best in what unfolds next!!   Take care.
 

Vancouver: thin envelope arrived this afternoon.  Time for an overhaul.  (Thinking of all the learning since I applied last Fall - I'm going to put it to work!)
A warm (well, rainy) thanks to all those who shared updates on this thread... it helps to better understand how this process works. I appreciate that it often takes more than one try. 
And, a hearty Congratulations to those with a thick envelope!  Well Done!!
For the other 1,183 of us: no shame.  It was a bubble of time imagining the possibilities... and I wish you all the best in what unfolds next!!   Take care.
 

Vancouver: thin envelope arrived this afternoon.  Time for an overhaul.  (Thinking of all the learning since I applied last Fall - I'm going to put it to work!)
A warm (well, rainy) thanks to all those who shared updates on this thread... it helps to better understand how this process works. I appreciate that it often takes more than one try. 
And, a hearty Congratulations to those with a thick envelope!  Well Done!!
For the other 1,183 of us: no shame.  It was a bubble of time imagining the possibilities... and I wish you all the best in what unfolds next!!   Take care.
 

Vancouver: thin envelope arrived this afternoon.  Time for an overhaul.  (Thinking of all the learning since I applied last Fall - I'm going to put it to work!)
A warm (well, rainy) thanks to all those who shared updates on this thread... it helps to better understand how this process works. I appreciate that it often takes more than one try. 
And, a hearty Congratulations to those with a thick envelope!  Well Done!!
For the other 1,183 of us: no shame.  It was a bubble of time imagining the possibilities... and I wish you all the best in what unfolds next!!   Take care.
 

Vancouver: thin envelope arrived this afternoon.  Time for an overhaul.  (Thinking of all the learning since I applied last Fall - I'm going to put it to work!)
A warm (well, rainy) thanks to all those who shared updates on this thread... it helps to better understand how this process works. I appreciate that it often takes more than one try. 
And, a hearty Congratulations to those with a thick envelope!  Well Done!!
For the other 1,183 of us: no shame.  It was a bubble of time imagining the possibilities... and I wish you all the best in what unfolds next!!   Take care.
 

Vancouver: thin envelope arrived this afternoon.  Time for an overhaul.  (Thinking of all the learning since I applied last Fall - I'm going to put it to work!)
A warm (well, rainy) thanks to all those who shared updates on this thread... it helps to better understand how this process works. I appreciate that it often takes more than one try. 
And, a hearty Congratulations to those with a thick envelope!  Well Done!!
For the other 1,183 of us: no shame.  It was a bubble of time imagining the possibilities... and I wish you all the best in what unfolds next!!   Take care.
 

Vancouver: thin envelope arrived this afternoon.  Time for an overhaul.  (Thinking of all the learning since I applied last Fall - I'm going to put it to work!)
A warm (well, rainy) thanks to all those who shared updates on this thread... it helps to better understand how this process works. I appreciate that it often takes more than one try. 
And, a hearty Congratulations to those with a thick envelope!  Well Done!!
For the other 1,183 of us: no shame.  It was a bubble of time imagining the possibilities... and I wish you all the best in what unfolds next!!   Take care.