1st yr PhD EE, honorable mention. (Awarded NDSEG though)
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1. E/E Summary:
The research topic is thoroughly covered, with background, research plans, and objectives clearly specified. Letter of recommendations really highlight the student's strengths and qualities. Stellar performance specifically with [outreach targeted towards] under represented minorities.
2. E/VG Summary:
I believe that the candidate is in a strong position to undertake such a challenging problem. She has access to the required lab space and resources at the institute. She has laid down an ambitious; however, an achievable plan for the research. I believe that her past achievements, industry and startup company experience, academic performance make her an ideal candidate for this fellowship.
3. VG/E Summary:
The applicant has proven to be a strong researcher with extensive experience. She is poised for success in her doctoral research and will be an important role model for women and minorities in STEM.
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Reviewer 3 in the individual comment sections did write some negative feedback that I don't think I could have avoided. They mentioned that given my past work it was surprising I didn't have more publications but a lot of my work has been export controlled/trade secret so it's not like I could have done it anyway. They also said it would have been nice if I had quantified the outcomes of my outreach work... but like who does that? They also disagreed w/reviewer 3 re:academic performance.
Either way, I don't think there's much I could have differently. It is what it is.