I’ll share the general formula I used for most of my LOI:
Intro: I am writing to you to express my interest in applying _____. My experiences have led me to this degree.
First Paragraph: Experience
- My exposure to public health via undergrad.
- Habitat for Humanity to make a positive impact on the housing insecurity crisis in Alabama.
- Skills I gained from researching with two profs.
- I decided to complete a thesis project.
Second Paragraph: Butter them up a little + tell them how their program will help you
- I read up about the program on their website and mentioned courses that would help me succeed in my career.
Conclusion:
- Summarize the two body paragraphs and tell them what I can do for their program (i.e. how I plan to contribute to the student body and program).
Nothing special tbh. Final 2 years average is +85%. First 2 years were atrocious.
Retook my stats course (first time I got a C, second time I got an A).
Working at a clinic on and off for a couple of years.
Volunteer at a hospital in first year.
Research with two professors but neither has been published yet.
A Habitat for Humanity trip to Alabama.
I am currently working on a thesis.
I think what really helped me was my letter of intent.