GRE ARGUMENT ESSAY EVALUATION HELP PLEASE

[bellad1]

Hi I was wondering if someone would be so kind to evaluate my argument essay for the GRE. 

 

ESSAY TOPIC FROM ETS:

"All students should be required to take the driver's education course at Centerville High School. In the past two years, several accidents in and around Centerville have involved teenage drivers. Since a number of parents in Centerville have complained that they are too busy to teach their teenagers to drive, some other instruction is necessary to ensure that these teenagers are safe drivers. Although there are two driving schools in Centerville, parents on a tight budget cannot afford to pay for driving instruction. Therefore an effective and mandatory program sponsored by the high school is the only solution to this serious problem."

Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

 

 

HERE IS MY RESPONSE:

 

 

[PsyDuck90]

This belongs in the GRE sub forum.