Anyone willing to give feedback on my SOP?

[papillon]

Hey everyone! Would anyone be willing to read and critique my SOP? I am applying to English PhD programs, hoping to specialize in 20th Century American women's writing and Feminist Theory. I am on my second draft of the statement now, but I'm having a tough time critiquing my own writing. Any help/criticism/suggestions would be GREATLY appreciated.

Thanks!

[skeletonkeys]

Sure, PM me!

[akraz]

Sure. I can take a look.

[caffeinated librarian]

I'd be happy to take a look!

[zjwah]

I'll take a look! Just send it over.

[JessR417]

I'll look at yours if you look at mine, PM me if you are interested!