ringo-ring Posted March 14, 2011 Posted March 14, 2011 “when you describe somebody’s actions in terms of what they’re ‘doing,’ that action is way more vivid in [a reader's] mind.” Subsequently, when action is imagined vividly, greater intention is associated with it. ... Those who read that the defendant “was firing gun shots” believed a more harmful intent of the defendant than those who read that he “fired gun shots”. from here bluejay16 and ringo-ring 2
enginerd Posted April 26, 2011 Posted April 26, 2011 That is fascinating, though I have absolutely no idea which would be better. I think I will keep this tidbit of information stored away for future reference. Very interesting, thanks!
canberra Posted April 26, 2011 Posted April 26, 2011 Very, very interesting! Thanks. Also read that rather than saying something like, "he was scared", we should describe fear, eg "His heart began beating rapidly and his hair tingled" or suchlike.
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