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[ameyak3112]

Issue Ques:  Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.

 

 

Every child is born with a talent inside them. It just takes different amount of time to identify that skill. The fortunate ones realise theirs very early.Such children must be given special training from an early age to develop their talent even better.

Learning in a person's life starts as soon as they're born. It's an endless process. However, the learning capacity decreases appreciably as we grow. The younger we are, the more efficiently and faster we can learn anything. If a person has an exceptional talent, it should be recognized by the society and encouraged to develop it since an early age. Providing them with the necessary environment and resources will surely make them learn better and enhance their interest in the subject. If this talent is not nurtured early, the child might lose interest in it as he/she grows, perhaps depriving the society of a greatly talented person.

It is said that 'Practice makes a man perfect'. Naturally, we get good at anything that we keep doing again and again. Likewise, if a precocious child is given the atmosphere to spend more time in their area of interest, they can be soon converted into masters of that thing! Sahal Kaushik was very good at math and aptitude since the age of three. He would spell tough words and math when his friends would be playing out in the ground. His mother identified this skill in him and realised that she has given birth to a super child! She started trainig him at home with math and other skills since the age of three. XYZ cracked the IIT-JEE, one of the toughest engineering entrances in the world with a national rank of 13! He could achieve this only because his talent was recognised early and he was given the required training ever since.

These young talents can even go to college earlier than their fellow children, and pursue higher education in the field. College would polish their talent even more and prepare them to face the world and showcase their talent to the real world and become renowned, maybe a celebrity too!

While children with early training can excel in most of the cases, sometimes it may happen that they get burdened by the persistent exposure to a single thing. This might make them nervous and affect their social life adversely- the life that they would otherwise have enjoyed just like everyone else.

Family and thus the society should thus help in motivating the children with God gifted talents to master them starting at an early age which would make them even more confident and excited to perform better.

[Brent@GreenlightGRE]

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[ameyak3112]

17 hours ago, Brent@GreenlightGRE said:

A lot of people post their Analytical Writing essays on forums like this, but those essays typically don’t receive many responses (if any). One alternative it to use ETS’s ScoreItNow service (https://www.dxrgroup.com/cgi-bin/scoreitnow/index.pl)  to get two essays scored by the official e-rater scoring program (for a $20 fee). It will give you a really good idea of the strength of your essays.

 

I hope that helps.

 

Cheers,

 

Brent

 

 

Thanks for the suggestion, Brent!