Reviews for my first draft of SOP

[Sayani26]

Hello guys,

I am new to this forum. I want to apply to U.S. Universities for Fall 2018. I have written the first draft of my SOP. I would be really grateful if you could go review my SOP.  I am attaching it here. 

 I know everyone is really busy so I thank you in advance for taking time of your busy schedule to read this.

Sayani.

SPACE SCIENCE SOP.doc

[samman1994]

I cannot open your document. You could PM me your SOP

[Sandmaster]

I am willing to look it over in my spare time. Let me know!

[Sayani26]

On 12/09/2017 at 2:22 AM, Sandmaster said:

I am willing to look it over in my spare time. Let me know!

It will be really great if you could do that.  I have attached the SOP here. 

SPACE SCIENCE SOP draft 2.pdf

[Sayani26]

On 12/09/2017 at 2:07 AM, samman1994 said:

I cannot open your document. You could PM me your SOP

Can you please check, if this one opens. 

SPACE SCIENCE SOP draft 2.pdf

Edited October 11, 2017 by Sayani26

[Sandmaster]

13 hours ago, Sayani26 said:

Can you please check, if this one opens. 

SPACE SCIENCE SOP draft 2.pdf

I am pretty sure attachments posted in public will not open on the forums. You need to directly message the person and attach it that way.