Thanks for sharing your story! I don't think this point can be said enough, since this question gets asked over and over again. I am also an English PhD student, and although I was able to get into a top program the first time around, I still wish I would have placed more emphasis on it sooner. I might have even received one of those "special" funding offers that you describe. Although I have 5 years of funding, I know a fellowship went to one of my cohorts who already has a masters and probably had a more solid writing sample than I did (I'm coming straight from my B.A.). I made the crucial mistake of believing I could just "rework" a 20-page research paper I had written the year before. It wasn't until one of my professors really sat down with me and helped me edit it that I realized how much work my old paper really needed to reach the caliber of what I can do now. I really feared it was too little too late, but I also luckily had some strong faculty members vouching for me, which I believe got me in in the end. Can't stress it enough - don't fixate on GRE scores or GPA at the cost of your writing sample and personal statements!