Nacychuks

While considering the pros of science and technology in your subject matter, I would suggest you include the adverse effect of technology exploitation.

I spotted several grammatical errors across each paragraphs. Also, I like the way you pitch your ideas, but your SOP needs to be refined all over again before final submission. The flow needs to be dynamic and I think you have a good stand if you could work on the SOP once again.

You can send me a copy of it, or post your statement of purpose on the thread. I will be glad to help you review it