Is the english title of my PhD thesis correct for a native speaker?

[justrobots]

I'm a non-native speaker writing my PhD thesis in English. I'm just worried that my thesis title might be incorrect. Can a native speaker please check the title :)?

The title is Visual Multimodal Mapping - Localization and Mapping Across Different Imaging Modalities

Regards, JustRobots

[bibliophile222]

Looks fine to me!

[avidnote]

Looks great. What is your native language, if I may ask?

[CozyD]

This title sounds fine.

For unrelated reasons, I'd recommend using a colon over a hyphen: https://www.sciencealert.com/hyphens-break-our-entire-system-of-scientific-ranking-new-analysis-reveals

[The Maritime Scholar]

I agree with @CozyD about using the colon over the hyphen. Most titles in academic papers use a colon instead of a hyphen. The title before the colon would be your main title, and the title after the colon would be your subtitle. 

P.S. Very interesting article, @CozyD!

Edited August 14, 2020 by The Maritime Scholar