Request for Feedback on Statement of Purpose?

[ClassicsCandidate]

Hi, all! I just wrote a statement of purpose for my application for Yale's Classical Art and Archaeology program and I wanted to know if anyone would be willing to look it over? I know it's a bit rough in places but I'm a bit stuck on knowing how/where to polish it. Thanks in advance!

[tittoo_m]

If you are still looking for feedback, I would be happy to take a look at your SOP. 

I am not an expert, I am applying to programs myself but would be happy to help other on this forum in any way I can.

[Pierre de Olivi]

I'm applying in a Classics-adjacent field (late antique religions) and have an undergrad background in Classics; I would be happy to edit or do an SOP swap if you are still looking for help! Just DM me.