Need help on my outline progress for a research paper

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This is my first year in college and for my critical thinking class I have to make a presentation on Leadership I am almost done with the outline which needs to be done in apa format its due this sunday.. I need someones advice on if this is a good outline so far or what I can do to make it better. This is my first research paper in 10 years. Just let me know if it looks good or where I can change or improve something. Thanks.... How is the thesis/introduction how can I wrap it up?

Week 5 Leadership Outline: 100 points

I. Leadership is a hard skill to define. Leadership is something learned its not something you are born with. There are many qualities one must poses to be an effective leader. Rather then list a random set of characteristics to try and define Leadership I will explain what it means to me.

A. The meaning and concept of leadership

B. William Henry “Bill” Gates III is one of the wealthiest American’s and is the chairman of Microsoft the worlds largest personal-computer and software company.

C. Understanding what it takes to become a leader

D. Leadership is something all of us can achieve. Learning leadership is a lifetime activity there is always something more to be learned.

II. Networking and Communication management

A. I enjoy working with computers, And as technology becomes more advanced there will always be a need for Networking Engineers

B. I expect to graduate by 2016

III. Bill Gates

A. He is one of the most well-known computer scientist and most successful businessman in America

B. Bill gates and his partner created micro-soft In 1975, “the pair worked around the clock to adapt a program from Beginners All-purpose Symbolic Instruction Code (BASIC )”. Carter D, Diane S. Bill Gates Great Lives From History: The Twentieth Century [serial online]. (September 2008) p1-2

IV. Someone who is Selfless, Knowledgeable, Committed and Trustworthy

A. “Great leaders possess several different attributes. Not only must they

understand the company’s big picture, They must also have the desire to help others do well and the ability to balance fairness with leadership”. Louden, K. (2012). Building Better Leaders. Collector (0010082X), Vol. 77 Issue 12, p45-46, 77(12), 45-46.

B. Positive leadership traits in your leader as found in research (use citations)

Dependable, Smart, Logical, Energetic, Humble

A. What are your personal strengths as a leader

1. Use previous assessments from the course (use citations)

2. What did you learn about yourself from these assessments?

B. How personal strengths can support success

1. Use previous assessments from the course (use citations)

C. What are you personal weaknesses as a leader

1. How you are going to improve on your weaknesses

Conclusion

A. Identify and re-state the main idea

B. Wrap up your ideas

[Eigen]

I'm not sure how you found this site, but this really isn't the right place to ask about this.

I would suggest going to your campus tutoring center, or going to your professor for assistance. It's also never a bad idea to make friends with classmates and have someone to practice with or review your work.