cwasson Posted December 15, 2013 Share Posted December 15, 2013 With the myriad of growth in the popularity in the study of the human brain, with research ventures such as The Human Brain Project in Europe and The BRAIN Initiative in the USA, there has never been a more an exciting time to be a neuroscientist. Even more, with breakthrough discoveries being made in Canada on a daily basis, there has never been a better time to pursue neurobiological research at a Canadian university. All being said, the choice to pursue a career in neuroscience research, at this climate of exciting discovery, was perhaps the easiest decision I have ever made. I vividly remember becoming fascinated with the subject in my second year of undergrad in my introduction to cognitive and behavioural neuroscience course. There I learned the fundamentals in the study of the human brain and found that I was beyond fascinated with the subject matter— I was hooked. From then on, I sought out opportunities to further grow my understanding of neuroscientific concepts and research skills. For my independent study project under Dr. X, I studied the effects of exogenous corticosterone administration on the myelination of the avian song control system. During this experiment, I was able to see the project though from its very inception, to the write- up of the final results, and to the final submission towards the prospect of publication. By undertaking this project I was able to hone my skills as a researcher and learn a plethora of useful techniques, such as immunohistochemical staining, working with animal models, cryosectioning, slide mounting, and microscopy skills, to name a few. In addition to my independent research, I was able to take an advanced level course under the direction of Dr. Y in research techniques in behavioural neuroscience. This unique opportunity enabled me to further develop my skills as a researcher by training me on how to write advanced scientific research papers, purposefully dissect a brain into various levels of observation, and extended my ability to work with rats as an animal model. My research background as well as my academic background has helped shape my scientific interests. Broadly speaking, my true passion lies in behavioural neuroscience. While I certainly would consider doing research strictly in cellular/molecular neurobiology, I find the underlying neurobiological underpinnings and how they contribute to the behavioural outcomes ultimately more fascinating. Furthermore, I am interested in three main ideas of neuroscientific research: neuroendocrinology/sexuality, the neuroscience of addiction/reward, and the neuromodulation of pain. Indeed, my interest was captured by those themes whilst writing course-based research papers. The first paper written, a research proposal, suggests administration of exogenous oxytocin reduces homonegativity in highly homophobic individuals. This paper sparked my interest in neuroendocrinology/sexuality. Further, the second paper, a literature review entitled, ‘The Painful Truth: A Comprehensive Review of Pain and Pain Management,’ specifically described the main theories of pain, therapeutic interventions used to treat pain, as well as some of the major limitations incurred during the study of pain. These past experiences have ultimately culminated in my decision to pursue an academic career in neuroscience; however, my first step to obtain my idealized career is to find a Graduate program that will allow me to pursue my passion. I hope to attend the Neuroscience Graduate Program at Z University because of the national and international recognition of the program, the quality of education available, the high standards for scientific investigation, and the opportunity to produce highly publishable research. Furthermore, whilst performing my search for graduate programs, I looked at the quality mentorship and the opportunities to work in a collaborative and friendly setting— Z University meets this criteria. Moreover, the labs at Z University align with my research interests. I am particularly interested in working with either, Dr. M, who studies addiction and pain using rats as animal models; Dr. R, who researches reward-like mechanisms in learning; or Dr. C, who investigates the neural basis of sexual function as well as dysfunction. The opportunity to work in these labs, among others related to my interests, would further enrich my academic conquests and allow me to contribute to the field by publishing exciting and novel research, that I would be particularly proud of. All being said, the Graduate Program in Neuroscience at Z University gives students an exciting opportunity to become true innovators in the field. With an MSc from the Neuroscience Graduate Program I believe that I will gain professional skills in research that will make me competitive as a PhD applicant. In addition, I believe that this program can equipment me with the tools that will allow me to independently think, further formulate contributory novel ideas to the world, but most of all, allow me to become a modern pioneer in the field of neuroscience. I wish to make breakthroughs as a Canadian neuroscientist much like Dr. Donald Hebb— after all, he taught at Z. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doefficient Posted December 15, 2013 Share Posted December 15, 2013 I think it looks great! I like the way you stated your research interests and I was engaged throughout the entire statement. I also think we're applying to the same school (different programs though) - wrapping up my SOP at the moment as well. Best of luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Human_ Posted December 15, 2013 Share Posted December 15, 2013 (edited) Fix the passive tense. for example: I was able to take -> I took The paper will read much better. Also, using a slash is too informal in this sentence: This paper sparked my interest in neuroendocrinology/sexuality. A slash doesn't connect the two words. Instead, say something like: This paper sparked my interest in the intersection between neuroendocrinology and sexuality. Also, "sparked my interest" is a colloquial term and should probably be avoided in this type of writing: This paper intrigued me to examine the intersection between neuroendocrinology and sexuality. You get the idea. Edited December 15, 2013 by Human_ cwasson and Human_ 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cwasson Posted December 15, 2013 Author Share Posted December 15, 2013 thanks guys! good advice. Do you think that it's too generic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TakeMyCoffeeBlack Posted December 15, 2013 Share Posted December 15, 2013 Move your research interests to the beginning. It takes a long time to find out what you actually want to do in grad school. Then talk about how your past research experience qualifies you for it. Just requires some quick reorganization, nothing huge. cwasson 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icydubloon Posted December 16, 2013 Share Posted December 16, 2013 (edited) because of the national and international recognition of the program, the quality of education available, the high standards for scientific investigation, and the opportunity to produce highly publishable research This is too generic -- you can say this about any university. I would cut this out. Edited December 16, 2013 by Icydubloon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canis Posted December 24, 2013 Share Posted December 24, 2013 You open with a phrase that doesn't mean anything: "With the myriad of growth" I stopped there, and so will the admissions committee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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