Need urgent advice on my SOP. All help appreciated :)

[shivani01]

I need urgent help with my Statement of purpose. 

I need to write a SOP under 3700 characters. However, I'm currently overshooting it by about 600 characters.

It would be really helpful if someone could review it and share their critique.

Thanks in advance for the help!

[jarrodthomas]

I sent my SOP to a current professor of mine who has a PH.D. in writing / English. I am overshooting mine by about 200 words. I understand the struggle lol. Do you have anyone who is really great with writing? Definitely ask them if you can't get any volunteers here. I'm a good writer but not as great as some others out there. Get a few people to look your SOP over.