@nightwolf1129- Wow. Thank you.
Once again, I am blown away by the thoughtful support I have received from being a member of this forum - thank you, thank you, thank you!
Although my ego is bruised, I know that I am a good candidate for graduate school and I will be taking the next year to do the very things you suggest - especially revising my SOP. Having gone through the application process, my goals are a lot clearer and I know just what I want to achieve with a MSW and in going to grad school - I think the admissions committee could sense that I was still working to make a clear goal in mind.
I currently work for HSA in SF - where I work to find long-term family connections for children who have entered the child welfare system. My work is great, but I don't have much direct care experience so I've decided to apply to intern at SFWAR (SF Women Against Rape) to provide crisis intervention and counseling to sexual assault victims. I hope that my continued work and this additional internship will not only expand my ability to provide support for others, but make my application shine.
I ultimately want to apply for the Children and Family Services concentration at UC Berkeley, UCLA and SF State - to have a shot at the Title IV Stipend. Any thoughts or recommendations on how I can achieve this goal??
You guys are great...