melissa.may

Hello, I have just written my SOP and need help with edits and/or a review of my paper. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. There are a few things I am considering deleting, but not sure what someone with experience/expertise thinks...I have not formatted the SOP as of yet. I plan to do so once the review/edits are completed. Thank you for your time and support! In case the file does not open, here is a link to the google doc. The viewer has permission to comment on the document itself. https://docs.google.com/document/d/14zb5YT73MSVn3kAwXnQKCsK2s_1AfKetprKCPTcaqpA/edit?usp=sharing StatementofPurpose-DoctorateofEducation.docx