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It would be great full if someone can help to review n grade my essay task.. Thanks in advance! Issue Task : Young people should be encouraged to pursue long term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition. Essay Having goals in ones life is as important as having the basic necessities of life.Reaching goals will keep up the moral and confidence of an individual.Thus goals being set must be achievable and realistic in nature.It should be long term plan which in-turn is made up of smaller short term goals. Attaining fame or recognition should not be the sole purpose of any goal being set. In-fact long term goals would not lead to recognition initially. Building upon a long plan with smaller chunks of goals as building block would be beneficial. Long term goals when reached are recognized for a longer time and are not transitory.Contrary ,having only short term goals can get fame immediately but only among a smaller population. Achieving short term goals which are not in sync or connected will not lead to any fruitful outcome. Companies like Facebook,Amazon etc did not flourish all of a sudden .It took a considerable amount of time to plan,design ,execute and reach success. Young people must think to achieve over a long period of time. Youngsters have time and vigor to do things in a very innovative way and they are the building blocks of any nations prosperity.Being realistic is a important factor that will also determine the success . Bringing a dead man alive is impossible and any efforts being put is of vain. Focusing on achievable results over a period of time rather immediate fame, will be beneficial. Space missions ,Multi-National companies or any other long sustained achievements were possible only by achieving short term inter-connected goals. The number of start-ups even though are increasing every year, most of them collapse drastically after few years due to lack of stability.They might initially get profit but are not able to sustain because planning for a longer run was inadequate and focused on immediate results. Achieving smaller goals boosts confidence but disjoint goals would lead to no where.Achieving smaller connected goals for a longer run will be sustainable and well known to greater population for a longer time.Thus younger generation should be encouraged to have a long term realistic goals.