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Hi,

I hope this does not come across the wrong way, but I do not think you are ready to be practicing for the GRE writing yet. Your examples are filled with grammatical errors, typose, and your points are very unclear. Am I right to assue english is your second language? It might be worth spending some time understanding how to write in english in the context of a simpler and smaller prompt before jumping into one of these philosophical AWA prompts. 

I think you should maybe look for SAT prompts or short writing prompts that are only meant to elicit a 300 word response and practice your clarilty on that before moving forward.

I would recommend Grammarly as an application to download and purchase, it helps with writing skills in English!