Essay feedback please

[MemoonaShah]

hi, 

I'm preparing for GRE to apply to study abroad. Can anyone here help me by grading my essays? Please let me know if you can help and i will send you my essay.

 

PS: I'm new and not native English speaker.

Thanks in advance. I appreciate the help.

Edited February 5, 2018 by MemoonaShah

[CFGauß]

I'm sorry, I will not be able to grade your essays but my advise would be to write one timed essay every morning before going to work/school and comparing it with the graded sample essays. I did this for a while and was able to increase my score from a 3-4 to a 4.5 in my final GRE results. It really helps more if you notice yourself where your writing is wanting by comparing them with 5- or 6-graded essays than have someone else just tell you their observations.

Edited February 9, 2018 by CFGauß