Help with my SOP

[melissa.may]

Hello,

 

I have just written my SOP and need help with edits and/or a review of my paper. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. There are a few things I am considering deleting, but not sure what someone with experience/expertise thinks...I have not formatted the SOP as of yet. I plan to do so once the review/edits are completed. 

 

Thank you for your time and support! 

In case the file does not open, here is a link to the google doc. The viewer has permission to comment on the document itself. 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14zb5YT73MSVn3kAwXnQKCsK2s_1AfKetprKCPTcaqpA/edit?usp=sharing

StatementofPurpose-DoctorateofEducation.docx

Edited July 31, 2016 by melissa.may