Anyone in the mood to destroy my engineering SOP?

[swannsway]

Anyone totally stressed out/angry? Please use my SOP as a punching bag! I gave it to my advisor to read and he said it was "pretty good", which is a relief but it's not that helpful. So, I'm looking for feedback that is slightly more meticulous. If you would like me to revise your essay also, I would be more than happy to. Let me know. 

thanks!

[SDxx]

Sure. Feel free to message me.

[Skod]

Sure. I'd be willing to look over it.

Edited December 1, 2016 by Skod

[hkcool]

I'll do it if you like. 

[luisalasnjr]

Feel free to send it to me as well! I'm in the middle of my finals...but I guess I have the time, right?

[sivakumaranandan]

I would like to help review.