Biology SOP review

[Joseses]

Hey, guys! 

As a foreign student, I've never had the need to write anything like a statement of purpose. 
Well, now that I'm applying to Grad School, I just finished mine. I would like to know if there's anyone here willing to take a look at it and give a few comments on how it is. 

Thanks!

[alanine]

3 hours ago, Joseses said:

Hey, guys! 

As a foreign student, I've never had the need to write anything like a statement of purpose. 
Well, now that I'm applying to Grad School, I just finished mine. I would like to know if there's anyone here willing to take a look at it and give a few comments on how it is. 

Thanks!

I'm applying for biology programs as well and I enjoy editing; send it my way either here, as PM, or a link to a google document, and I will be sure to take a look.

[Carly Rae Jepsen]

I could take a look! Feel free to PM

[samman1994]

I'm going for Biochem, so I could take a look if you like