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uromastyx

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  1. in a metaphysical sense i'd say they have the capacity to be equally real, and thus also stand imbalanced, perhaps even speak to the fluidity of reality.
  2. TGIF. Bring on the acceptances before the weekend! Good luck, y'all.

  3. Welcome to graduate school Unfortunately, for many of us there's nothing to be done. Yet, I believe that I am getting too much sleep I don't have enough on my plate.
  4. This is common, no doubt. My only advice is to use this as motivation to compete (in a healthy sense) and push yourself to the best of your abilities.
  5. I'm sorry to hear this. Do you plan to reapply? I was rejected from all my schools last year.
  6. There are scores of grammatical issues here. Do you have someone that can read it thoroughly for you?
  7. I will say that any paid help with writing samples or SOPs is strictly prohibited by graduate schools. Do find a faculty member or qualified person that will help you free of charge.
  8. It depends. The only way to know would be to contact the department or graduate school (wherever you submitted the documents). Call them up. Typically it's not the end of the world.
  9. Please don't take offense to my comments here. This SOP needs a lot of work, so I won't sugar coat it. Here are (a few of) my honest criticisms: That huge, first paragraph should go. It is dangerously cliche and, more importantly, takes up way too much space. The paragraph on hobbies needs to go as well. It is another cliched forcing of character. Plus entirely irrelevant. "... a tech-savvy person." Is this really the avenue you want to take in convincing an adcomm of your potential for successful graduate study? Watch out for these types of claims that, at the very best, appear empty, and at worst, naive. There is a polarized sense of language here, where the pretentious clashes with usages of "I got a GPA.." and "...my batch." Find a nice middle ground of style and diction that isn't so jarring. "During my years as a senior in college..." Years? Plural? NO. I'm not sure if this is a typo or you were a 'super senior.' Regardless, don't say this. Also, I would say "first year" or "second year" or "final two years" and not the college jargon (Junior, Senior). This statement as a whole is little more than a wordy (!) description of your CV/transcript in prose. Why list out you courses in this manner? It reads somewhat like this: "I liked course A. I was the best student ever in course B. Then I took course C, which I liked as well." What are the nuances in your relationship to computer science? How has your coursework (as a whole) contributed to your interest(s with)in the field? "The concepts and algorithms taught in class always seemed to remain in the back of my mind and I felt a natural affinity for them; I was even castigated by my mother one night for spending some extra time on them that I had reserved for other subjects. These moments, and a few similar others, made me decide that given a chance, I would continue to be involved with these courses, and would try to spend the remainder of my professional life in the field of Computer Science." I don't mean to be rude here, but I'm LOLing at parts of this statement. Which means adcomms will as well. Again, spare us the dramatics. "I can confidently say that my aptitude in research is aptly demonstrated by my performance in my final year project." Sentences like this 1)may come across as arrogant, 2) don't actually say anything and 3) aren't supported. Also, in one sentence you've written both "aptitude" and "aptly." This sentence is one of many that is boastful and unnecessary, not to mention employs the passive voice in prime opportunities for the active. Your statement should paint your portrait. it should show, not tell. You absolutely must have faculty read multiple drafts of your SOP. It requires a very nuanced approach. In beginning, I would outline your relationship to the field. Delimit your interests and intent. IF you can find a GOOD hook then use it. Adcomms don't want a three page statement that lists your transcript, while peppering paragraphs with how much you liked the classes, and how awesome you were. *In my best police officer voice*: Step away from the thesaurus! Your diction seems silly at times. Strive for eloquence. Your second to last paragraph finally gets to the heart of the matter; your interest in their program. Does your current statement mirror your description of their program? (To be clear, this part of the SOP should remain where it is, before the conclusion.) Just keep at it. Revise, revise, revise. Have people continue to read it. Your own understanding will become more clear as you hash it out. Best of luck.
  10. Same; a mug from the school I've chosen and some coffee/tea included.
  11. Have you received an official letter yet? If it's indeed been a couple of weeks then I would think it appropriate to inquire with whichever faculty member informed you of the acceptance.
  12. Eureka. That would make sense. I didn't realize any schools really did rounds in the States.
  13. You may want to retake the GRE and see if you can boost those scores a bit, especially the Quant.
  14. Thanks for the anecdote. I too have mediocre GREs, but a strong writing sample and a stacked CV. Luckily, the scores were decent enough for adcomms to read my apps.
  15. Two acceptances and an interview. Today was a decent day.

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    2. Eager

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      Decent? Sounds pretty awesome to me!

    3. callyw22
    4. CP3

      CP3

      Jealous, but congrats!

  16. Like one of those 64oz slushie mugs??
  17. finishing this book chapter, which has an approaching final submission deadline. but with Gradcafe and Downton Abbey.....
  18. idk your field, which is fine, because it's too late. we all do/did this - worrying about all the little details of the application. try to not stress about it. Deep breaths, my friend, deep breaths.
  19. I was rejected by 10 programs last year. EVERYTHING is different this year. I haven't heard from most of the schools I've applied to, but I've already been accepted to my number one. I should be hearing from the rest soon. Hard work pays off.
  20. I applied abroad and it posed no problems for me. I contacted POIs via email and all applications were online. I did, however, have my fiance mail certain materials for me.
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